Brian Josephson IB Junior English: Topic Sentence: Blood Wedding

Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Topic Sentence: Blood Wedding

Leonardo, prior to the wedding, treats his family condescendingly in order to hide his desire to run away with the Bride.

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MichelleMay 10, 2012 at 3:32 PM
insight:5
clarity:6
accuracy:5
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Tristy R.May 10, 2012 at 5:25 PM
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Not quite the evil number....
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Matt FranzMay 10, 2012 at 6:52 PM
Accuracy- 6
Insight- 5
Clarity- 6
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I am what you would call a maximizer. I try to get the most out of life and enjoy all of it. I believe that having a variety of experiences makes people open minded and intelligent, and improves their quality and understanding of life. Experiences important to me involve observing different cultures, finding relationships between different groups of people, and exploring how far I can push myself. I have pursued these experiences by running in Portland to Coast twice (this year I am running Hood to Coast), playing basketball, soccer and tennis for the high school, and playing on a traveling soccer team. When I am older I plan to travel to as many places as I can. The ideal vacation for me isn't a nice sunny resort, but a place where the culture is as different as possible from how I was raised. Relating to people that have had a completely different upbringing than me will help me understand what really makes us all human. This will let me live a life where I know how to better contribute to all of society.